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punctuation & context clues: my father. text. 17 july 2021.



dialogue: punctuation. context clues.
character: mu father
dates: 9/28/21 to 10/7/21 
breakdown: Cal dad commentary delete insertion add punctuation replacement excision (>2 lines)

The topic of discussion is irrelevant. Focus on the section in bold.

Cal                         
If You can find a hook too that'd be great I think - I have one of the hook.

And then everything we talked about so far that's about it. I\"m trying to decide what to bring to you because I just have too much stuff

dad                         
The only other thing you mentioned was a monitor power cable and your car floor mat.

Cal                         
That's him to another one in there I think I had a cable modem from company name that I thought I brought with me but I can\"t find it

dad                        
Read your texts before you send

Cal                        
That's There him to should be another one in there. I think I had a cable modem from company name. I thought I brought it with me. But I can\"t find it.

Punctuate context clues. I changed exactly one word

dad                        
You should still read them first
I don't think this problem is exclusive to me. We all put in the minimal effort for maximum payout. The amount of effort put into me is just low. "Don't let anyone live rent free in your head," Judy Shepard once told me and a group of friends (yes, his mother). 

No one's been hanging around for free, but I do offer a lot of rental assistance subsidies, even on late payments.

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